Hanbok
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] Song!
Thank you for making your homework today too! Congratulation! Most of your sentences were correct! You asked me if I like the hanbok and my answer is I do too. I think it is very beautiful and colorful. I wish I could wear a hanbok someday even though I\'m not a Korean. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
1. I intruduce Korea national clothes hanbok.
>>I want to introduce Korea\'s national clothes: Hanbok.
2. The hanbok is very comfortable and pretty.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: The hanbok is beautiful and very comfortable to wear.
3. Every Korean likes hanbok.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: All Koreans like wearing hanbok.
4. I like hanbok too.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: I like our national clothing too.
5. What about you teacher?
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: How about you teacher?
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