Hanbok is the most proud culture of South Korea.
학생이 쓴 원문
I get a pride as a Korean when I wear a Hanbok, what is traditional clothes in Korea.
I think Hanbok is the most beautiful clothes in the world!
So I bought 6 Hanboks because I want to wear when I meet my friends and travel to another cites or foreign countries.
I have a black-colored Hanbok with a jumpsuit type. This Hanbok is very comfortable, so I usually wear this when I travel.
Actually I traveled Paris last year with this Hanbok, and it was in harmony with the scenery of Paris.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
I am so proud of you taking pride of your national South Korean traditional clothing Hanbok. It is highly recognizable as an Oriental or Eastern style with its unique fabric texture and design. I have never heard of one person who takes pride in wearing the Hanbok as you. You are a patriot!
Usually, I see your countrymen wear your Hanbok during the parade in my city with fuchsia, neon green. among many others along with the beat of your special drums.
I wonder what the ones you used in Paris looks like. Tell them more in class.
Thus, read your sentences below and deter[이름]e the correct terms or words appropriate in those sentences. You did great her on this homework!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>> I get a pride as a Korean when I wear a Hanbok, which is the traditional clothes in Korea.
I think Hanbok is the most beautiful clothes in the world!
>> Correct!
So I bought 6 Hanboks because I want to wear when I meet my friends and travel to another cites or foreign countries.
>> So I bought 6 Hanboks because I want to wear one when I meet my friends and travel to another city or foreign countries.
I have a black-colored Hanbok with a jumpsuit type. This Hanbok is very comfortable, so I usually wear this when I travel.
I have a black-colored Hanbok with a jumpsuit type. This Hanbok is very comfortable, so I usually wear this when I travel.
>> Correct!
Actually I traveled Paris last year with this Hanbok, and it was in harmony with the scenery of Paris.
Actually I traveled Paris last year with this Hanbok, and it was in harmony with the scenery of Paris.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!
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