Hand phone
학생이 쓴 원문
What i want to do in my spare time is hand phone game
강사 첨삭
Hey there [이름]!
I heard you\'re into mobile games – how awesome is that? They\'re such a cool way to spend your spare time. There are so many games out there, it\'s like a whole new world to explore, right? What\'s your favorite game to play? I bet you\'re good at it! Keep enjoying, and don\'t forget to take breaks too, okay? Have fun!
~Teacher Cathy
What i want to do in my spare time is hand phone game
>>What I like doing in my spare time is playing mobile games.
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