Handle your stress
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I got a stress when something goes wrong and I can\'t fix it by myself. To relieve my stress, I take a rest for a while to feel relaxed. It actually helpful because when I\'m under peaceful space, I would buy enough time to get better. However others might want loud space in same situation. It depends on your taste.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
Peaceful places are the way to go.
You can hear yourself think and function better.
Here\'s to getting rid of all the stress!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I got a stress when something goes wrong and I can\'t fix it by myself.
>> I get stressed whenever something goes wrong and I can\'t fix it by myself.
To relieve my stress, I take a rest for a while to feel relaxed.
>> Correct
It actually helpful because when I\'m under peaceful space, I would buy enough time to get better.
>> It\'s actually helpful because when I\'m at a peaceful place, I would have enough time to get better.
However others might want loud space in same situation.
>> However others might want to be in loud places in the same situation.
It depends on your taste.
>> It depends on your needs.
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