Handling work-related stress
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Hello, Thomas!
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When I get the stress I run.
>> When I get stressed, I run.
It is my best way to relase the stress even work-related.
>> It\'s my best way to release stress, even if it\'s work-related.
Or I hang out with friends of mine and drink alcohol.
>> Another way I cope with stress is by hanging out with my friends and having a drink.
Or I do both of things.
>> Sometimes, I do both of these things.
I think If body is good condition I can endure the strees.
>> I think if the body is in good condition, I can endure the stress.
Runing is good for my health and release the strees.
>> Running is good for my health and helps release stress.
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