Handling work-related stress

2023-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Joy

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When I get the stress I run. It is my best way to relase the stress even work-related. Or I hang out with friends of mine and drink alcohol. Or I do both of things. I think If body is good condition I can endure the strees. Runing is good for my health and release the strees.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Thomas!

Thank you for doing your homework. By practicing more, you\'ll become even better at making sentences and maintaining proper spelling and capitalization.

-Joy ^^

When I get the stress I run.

>> When I get stressed, I run.

 It is my best way to relase the stress even work-related.

>> It\'s my best way to release stress, even if it\'s work-related.

Or I hang out with friends of mine and drink alcohol.

>> Another way I cope with stress is by hanging out with my friends and having a drink.

Or I do both of things.

>> Sometimes, I do both of these things.

I think If body is good condition I can endure the strees.

>> I think if the body is in good condition, I can endure the stress.

Runing is good for my health and release the strees.

>> Running is good for my health and helps release stress.

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