Handsome English

Hi there, [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I agree with what you wrote here.

I think English helps us understand the different cultures and traditions of the world.

Without it, we are only exposed to our own country\'s culture.

And there would probably be plenty of misunderstandings whenever we travel to another country.

Kindly review my corrections below.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

I think that English language contains many vowels and various pitches so I sometimes feel that English seems like a rap song or a lyric poem.

>> I think the English language contains many sounds and pitches so I sometimes feel that it\'s like a rap song or a lyric poem.

Do I have to polish up my rap skill for better English? -.-?

>> Do I have to polish my rap skill to become better at English?

However in my opinion the best beauty of English is its profound knowledge.

>> In my opinion, the beauty of the English language is it gives us profound knowledge.

English includes enormous knowledge throughout the world.

>> English provides us with vast knowledge of the world.

There is no comparison between English and other languages.

>> CORRECT!

Therefore, to my way of thinking, learning English is the process approaching to knowledge.

>> Therefore, I think learning English is a great process for us to gain knowledge.