Handsome is best hahaha
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There are some brunch restaurant near by at my home.
That restaurant have very good serve.
It\'s a buffet style brunch cafe.
And most important thing is every part time jobber they are handsome.
Of course, the food is good too, but especially when I look at them.
I feel so very comfortable:)
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann!
You made me laugh as I was reading your answer. Great choice! Hahaha!
There are some brunch restaurant near by at my home.
>> There are some brunch restaurants nearby my home.
That restaurant have very good serve.
>> They serve good food there.
It\'s a buffet style brunch cafe.
>> CORRECT
And most important thing is every part time jobber they are handsome.
>> The most important thing is that the part timers there are handsome.
Of course, the food is good too, but especially when I look at them.
>> Of course, the food is good too, but it becomes better when I look at them.
I feel so very comfortable:)
>> I feel so comfortable there. :)
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