hangover~~
학생이 쓴 원문
good afternoon lei~~
I felt nauseous for hangover this morning.
As soon as I arrive my work place.
I made a cup of honey water which is very sweet
and drank it bottoms up.
I'm still painful in spite of my efort for better condition.
Although I am suffering from hangover I had some quality time with
depressed friend who had a quarrel for love.
I hope that she loves him more and make up with her boyfriend.
Because her boyfriend is a good guy and he loves she deeply.
love is difficult. don't you think?
강사 첨삭
Hi J!! Good afternoon. I hope you are feeling better when you read this. I try to drink ice cold fruit juice or have a spicy when I am having a hangover. That's how I deal with it. You can try it. ^^ Anyways, I agree that love is complicated. As I told you before, having arguments and misunderstandings with your partner is part of a relationship and this obstacles could help your relationship stronger. I hope your friend could fix thing between her and her boyfriend. Have a great day!!!
Lei J
good afternoon lei~~>>correct^^I felt nauseous for hangover this morning.>> I felt nauseous because of hangover this morning.As soon as I arrive my work place.>> As soon as I arrived at my work place.I made a cup of honey water which is very sweet and drank it bottoms up.>>correct^^I'm still painful in spite of my efort for better condition.>>I'm still in pain (or I am still having a headache) in spite of my effort to have a better condition.Although I am suffering from hangover I had some quality time with a depressed friend who had a quarrel for love.>> Although I am suffering from hangover I had some quality time with a depressed friend who had an argument with her boyfriend.I hope that she loves him more and make up with her boyfriend.>>I hope that she loves him that much and make up with her boyfriend.Because her boyfriend is a good guy and he loves her deeply.>>correct^^love is difficult. don't you think?
>>correct^^
>>love is complicated. What do you think?
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