Hannah, could you check some sentences?

These are sentences made by me and my friend. we are studying four subjects every day to prepare part 6. i need your help to check these whether these is correct or not. i'm sorry because these seem like so many ㅠㅠ but, please~~ Q : Living in a city is very attractive. In the city, there are many facilities making our life conveniently such as a public transportation system. If I want go to somewhere, I can take the public transportations. For example, last week, I met my friends at the CGV theater. It is located near my house, so it take about ten minute from my house by subway. It is impossible it the country.

Hello there [이름]!^^ I have here my corrections!^^ Check them out for me then! Bye!^O^ ~t. Hannah~ These are sentences made by me and my friend. >>Correct!we are studying four subjects every day to prepare part 6. >>We are studying four subjects everyday to prepare for part 6.i need your help to check these whether these is correct or not. >>Correct!i\'m sorry because these seem like so many ㅠㅠ >>Correct!but, please~~ >>Correct!Q : Living in a city is very attractive.In the city, there are many facilities making our life conveniently such as a public transportation system.>>In the city, there are many facilities making our lives convenient such as the public transportation. If I want go to somewhere, I can take the public transportations. >>Correct!For example, last week, I met my friends at the CGV theater. >>Correct! Or>>For instance...It is located near my house, so it take about ten minute from my house by subway. >>Tit is located near my house so it takes about ten minutes to travel from my place to the subway.It is impossible it the country. >>It is impossible in this country.