Hannah, could you check these sentences?
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : Do you think the most important thing that manager should possess is teaching skill for his staff?
No.
In an organization, people who have a good communication skill can coordinate their organization effectively.
Thus, work will follow more smoothly.
That’s why I think the communication skill is important for a leader.
For example, I have a good communication skill. So I could lead my platoon effectively when I was an officer.
Q : Who do you think has the most necessary role in society from the following list?
-teacher, lawyer, scientist
Teachers teach children who are the future of our society.
Also, they give specific knowledge to us.
It contributes to a country’s development.
If there are no teachers, our society will regress.
강사 첨삭
[이름]!^^
Check them out for me!^______^
~t. Hannah~
Q : Do you think the most important thing that manager should possess is teaching skill for his staff?No.>>Correct!
In an organization, people who have a good communication skill can coordinate their organization effectively.
>>Correct!Thus, work will follow more smoothly.
>>Correct!That’s why I think the communication skill is important for a leader.
>>Correct!For example, I have a good communication skill.
>>Correct!
So I could lead my platoon effectively when I was an officer.
>>So I could lead my platoon effectively and efficiently onve I\'m an officer.Q : Who do you think has the most necessary role in society from the following list?-teacher, lawyer, scientistTeachers teach children who are the future of our society.
>>Correct!Also, they give specific knowledge to us.
>>Correct!It contributes to a country’s development.
>>Correct!If there are no teachers, our society will regress.
>>Correct!
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