Hannah, could you check these sentences?

Q : Do you agree or disagree? “Healthcare should be socialized and mad free for everyone” There are so many people who have financial difficulty. So, if the government do not help them, their life becomes more difficult. Then, our society will regress. Also, I can’t afford a lot of healthcare fee. Q : Participating in sports should be encouraged as it is the best way for people to stay healthy There are many people who stay healthy by doing sports regularly. If you play sports consistently, your life becomes more healthy. For example, in my case, I do exercise at a fitness center three times per week. It relives my stress. Also, it is good for my health. So, I recommend you doing exercise regularly such as soccer and basket ball.

Hi there [이름]!^^ kkkk I checked them already for you. ^^ Practice more and consider my corrections! ~T. Hannah~ Q : Do you agree or disagree? “Healthcare should be socialized and mad free for everyone”There are so many people who have financial difficulty. >>Correct! OR>>There are a lot of people who have financial problems.So, if the government do not help them, their life becomes more difficult. >>So If the government can\'t do anything about it, their lives become more difficult.Then, our society will regress. >>Correct!Also, I can’t afford a lot of healthcare fee.>>Correct!Q : Participating in sports should be encouraged as it is the best way for people to stay healthyThere are many people who stay healthy by doing sports regularly. >>Correct!If you play sports consistently, your life becomes more healthy. >>Correct!For example, in my case, I do exercise at a fitness center three times per week. >>Correct!It relives my stress. >>Correct!  Also, it is good for my health. >>Correct!So, I recommend you doing exercise regularly such as soccer and basket ball. >>Correct!