Hannah, could you check these sentences?

Q : All forms of drugs should be legalized. When I get a minor illness, I need some drugs for that immediately. I guess that would be convenient. For example, in my country, I can buy some drugs in a convenient store without any complicated procedure. Q : Do you think that students can have a sense of belonging as they wear school uniforms? School uniform is a symbol of the school. Also, student can feel closer to each other. For example, when I was a high school student, I wore a school uniform. First time, I hate wearing the school uniform because I think it restrain my freedom. But as time goes by, I could feel closer with my school friends.

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I have just one correction for you here!^O^

Good job my dear!

Check it out!

Take care!

~t. Hannah~

Q : All forms of drugs should be legalized.
When I get a minor illness, I need some drugs for that immediately.

>>Correct!
I guess that would be convenient.

>>Correct!
For example, in my country, I can buy some drugs in a convenient store without any complicated procedure.
>>Correct!
Q : Do you think that students can have a sense of belonging as they wear school uniforms?
School uniform is a symbol of the school. Also, student can feel closer to each other.

>>Correct!
For example, when I was a high school student, I wore a school uniform.

>>Correct!

First time, I hate wearing the school uniform because I think it restrain my freedom.

>>First time, I hate wearing the school uniform because I think it restrains my freedom.

But as time goes by, I could feel closer with my school friends.

>>Correct!