Hannah, could you check these sentences?

2013-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Hannah

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Q : Do you prefer to get a job that requires a lot of business trip? I’m a very active person. I can meet many people and visit a lot of location. I can experience many things about other country’s food, culture, transportation, and so on. Also, I can make foreign friends. For example, I usually go to a business trip two times about month. I could learn many things when I went to Philippine due to a business trip. Q : Parents are the best source of getting advice in our lives. We learn many things from parents. I spend many times with my parents. So, they know exactly what I need because they have many experiences. For example, last week, I should make an important decision in my life. (or which can influence my life?) I got advice from my parents. So I could make a right decision. So I could come up with a right decision.

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[이름]!^^ Take time to read my corrections for you, okay? ^o^ I\'ll talk to you soon! ~t. Hannah~ Q : Do you prefer to get a job that requires a lot of business trip?I’m a very active person. >>Correct!I can meet many people and visit a lot of location. >>I can meet a lot of people and visit a lot of places.I can experience many things about other country’s food, culture, transportation, and so on. >>Correct!Also, I can make foreign friends. >>Correct!For example, I usually go to a business trip two times about month. >>Correct! I could learn many things when I went to Philippine due to a business trip. >>I learned a lot of things about the Philippines and it was actually a business trip.Q : Parents are the best source of getting advice in our lives.We learn many things from parents. >>We learn a lot of things from our parents.I spend many times with my parents. >>I spend tons of my time with my parents.So, they know exactly what I need because they have many experiences. >>Correct!For example, last week, I should make an important decision in my life. (or which can influence my life?) >>For instance, last week I had to make a very important decision of my life. I got advice from my parents. >>I got an advice from my parents. So I could make a right decision. >>For me to make the right decision.So I could come up with a right decision. >>And with their help, I can hopefully come up with the right decsion.

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