Hannah, could you check these sentences?
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Q : Do you prefer to get a job that requires a lot of business trip?
I’m a very active person.
I can meet many people and visit a lot of location.
I can experience many things about other country’s food, culture, transportation, and so on.
Also, I can make foreign friends.
For example, I usually go to a business trip two times about month. I could learn many things when I went to Philippine due to a business trip.
Q : Parents are the best source of getting advice in our lives.
We learn many things from parents.
I spend many times with my parents.
So, they know exactly what I need because they have many experiences.
For example, last week, I should make an important decision in my life. (or which can influence my life?)
I got advice from my parents. So I could make a right decision.
So I could come up with a right decision.
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~t. Hannah~
Q : Do you prefer to get a job that requires a lot of business trip?I’m a very active person.
>>Correct!I can meet many people and visit a lot of location.
>>I can meet a lot of people and visit a lot of places.I can experience many things about other country’s food, culture, transportation, and so on.
>>Correct!Also, I can make foreign friends.
>>Correct!For example, I usually go to a business trip two times about month.
>>Correct!
I could learn many things when I went to Philippine due to a business trip.
>>I learned a lot of things about the Philippines and it was actually a business trip.Q : Parents are the best source of getting advice in our lives.We learn many things from parents.
>>We learn a lot of things from our parents.I spend many times with my parents.
>>I spend tons of my time with my parents.So, they know exactly what I need because they have many experiences.
>>Correct!For example, last week, I should make an important decision in my life. (or which can influence my life?) >>For instance, last week I had to make a very important decision of my life.
I got advice from my parents.
>>I got an advice from my parents.
So I could make a right decision.
>>For me to make the right decision.So I could come up with a right decision.
>>And with their help, I can hopefully come up with the right decsion.
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