Hannah, could you check these sentences?

Q : Small store cannot successfully compete with large department store. There are many products in the large department stores under the one roof. Even, these are cheaper than small store’s products. And in the large department store, there are many parking spaces. It is very convenient. For example, last week I went to E-MART with my mom. It is located near my house. It just takes about ten minutes by foot. I bought a lot of groceries but the price was very reasonable. It is impossible at the small stores. So, I think Small store cannot successfully compete with large department store. We are living in capitalism. I think money is the most important thing in my life. Work is just work. So, if I have to work, I want to get a job that I can earn the most. For example, if I have a lot of money, I can buy many things such as fancy cars, a big house, and what I want. Also, I can give some money to my parents or friends when they are faced with emergency.

Hello there my dear!^^ You\'ve been answering the questions very well.^^ Well anyway, I still want you to check my corrections below! Take care now! See you later! ~t. Hannah~ Q : Small store cannot successfully compete with large department store.There are many products in the large department stores under the one roof. >>There are a lot of products in large department stores under one roof.Even, these are cheaper than small store’s products. >>Correct!And in the large department store, there are many parking spaces. >>Correct! It is very convenient. >>Correct!For example, last week I went to E-MART with my mom. >>Correct!It is located near my house. It just takes about ten minutes by foot. >>Correct!I bought a lot of groceries but the price was very reasonable. >>I bought a lot of groceries and the price was very reasonable.It is impossible at the small stores. >>Correct!So, I think Small store cannot successfully compete with large department store.>>Correct!We are living in capitalism. >>We are in capitalistic country.I think money is the most important thing in my life. >>Correct!Work is just work. >>Correct!So, if I have to work, I want to get a job that I can earn the most. >>Correct!For example, if I have a lot of money, I can buy many things such as fancy cars, a big house, and what I want. >>Correct!Also, I can give some money to my parents or friends when they are faced with emergency. >>Correct!