Hannah, could you check these sentences?

the goal to make these script is minimizing things which have to memorize and practice. so many sentences are overlapped, maybe. refer it ^^;; Q : some people think that boys and girls should go to separate schools. Others think that they should attend school together. Which one do you agree with? I think that boys and girls should go to separate school. If they attend school together, they can’t concentrate on their own study. Also, they don’t have to consider what they wear at everyday In my case, when I was a high school student, I went to a boy’s school. So I could concentrate on my study and I got a good grade. It was a cleaver decision. Q: to improve public transportation, what thing would you want it to change? In Korea, public transportation fee is pretty expensive. So, I think that public transportation fee should be lowered. There are so many people who have financial problem. I guess they can’t afford lots of transportation fee.

Good morning to you [이름]! You answered the questions directly!^^ I have my corrections below please check them too. kkkk^_____^ Take care now! ~t. Hannah~ the goal to make these script is minimizing things which have to memorize and practice. >>The main goal of this one is to minimize sentences that i have to memorize and practice.so many sentences are overlapped, maybe. refer it ^^;;>>A lot of the sentneces needed to be corrected, kindly check it please ^^Q : some people think that boys and girls should go to separate schools. Others think that they should attend school together. Which one do you agree with?I think that boys and girls should go to separate school. >>I think boys and girls should go to separate schools.If they attend school together, they can’t concentrate on their own study. >>If they go to the same school, I think both parties cannot concentrate well on their studies.Also, they don’t have to consider what they wear at everyday >>And they should also consider the clothes they weay everyday.In my case, when I was a high school student, I went to a boy’s school. >>Well in my case, I went to all-male school. So I could concentrate on my study and I got a good grade.>>For me to be able to concentrate well adn I eventually had good grades. It was a cleaver decision. >>It was clever decision.Q: to improve public transportation, what thing would you want it to change?In Korea, public transportation fee is pretty expensive. >>Correct! So, I think that public transportation fee should be lowered. >>Correct! Or>>I think public transportation fees should be lessened.There are so many people who have financial problem. >>Correct!I guess they can’t afford lots of transportation fee. >>I guess they can\'t afford hign transprtation fees.