Hannah, could you check these sentences?

In my case, I spend transportation fee about thirty dollars per month. It is the burden for me. If the government do not lower transportation fee, our lives become more difficult. Q: do you think that women should work after they give birth? There are many experienced women who experienced birth. I guess they have good communication skill rather than men. They can coordinate their team effectively with their good communication skill. So, company’s work will flow more smoothly if they work at that. Overall, women who experienced birth should work if they want. Q: do you prefer to have American food or Korean food as a daily meal? Why? When I feel hungry, I usually have Korean food as a meal. It has a lot of nutrition such as protein and vitamin. And its taste is better than American food, in my think because I am [Name]

[이름]!^^ Here are my corrections!^^ Check them out again. kkkk See you! ~t. Hannah~ In my case, I spend transportation fee about thirty dollars per month. >>Correct! It is the burden for me. >>It\'s a burden to me.If the government do not lower transportation fee, our lives become more difficult.>>Correct!Q: do you think that women should work after they give birth?There are many experienced women who experienced birth. >>Correct! Or>>There are many women who already gave birth.I guess they have good communication skill rather than men. >>Correct!They can coordinate their team effectively with their good communication skill. >>Correct!So, company’s work will flow more smoothly if they work at that. >>So it would be a good idea for companies to have them.Overall, women who experienced birth should work if they want. >>Correct! Or>>All in all, women who expreienced such should be given the right to work.Q: do you prefer to have American food or Korean food as a daily meal? Why?When I feel hungry, I usually have Korean food as a meal. >>Correct! It has a lot of nutrition such as protein and vitamin. >>It has lots of nutrition in it.And its taste is better than American food, in my think because I am [Name] >>And it tastes better than American food since I am a Korean.