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Q: in order to reduce teenage crime, which do you think is more important: harsh punishment or personal consultation? I think personal consultation is more important rather than harsh punishment. When I was a high school student, I was a trouble maker. I had (or got?) personal consultation from teachers. After that, I changed my mind. I concentrated on my study and got a good grade. I could become a good student. Q: what are the advantages of Temple stay in Korea? Firstly, you can experience a traditional Korea culture by Temple stay. And, it is good for your health. You can feel fresh air at a temple. It relives your stress, too Also, I recommend meditation to you. After doing meditation, you can concentrate on your work more effectively. And you can refresh your mind and body. I went to BUL- GUK temple 2 years ago. I stayed for week. It was unforgettable memory to me.

Hello there [이름]!^^ Keep on learning and continue what you already started!^^ I\'m so proud of you!kkkk ~t. Hannah~ Q: in order to reduce teenage crime, which do you think is more important: harsh punishment or personal consultation?I think personal consultation is more important rather than harsh punishment. >>Correct!When I was a high school student, I was a trouble maker. >>Correct!I had (or got?) personal consultation from teachers. >>I had some personal consultations from my teachers. After that, I changed my mind. >>Correct!I concentrated on my study and got a good grade. >>I concentrated on my studies and got good grades. I could become a good student. >>I became a good student.Q: what are the advantages of Temple stay in Korea?Firstly, you can experience a traditional Korea culture by Temple stay. >>Firstly, you can actually expreience Korean culture through that.And, it is good for your health. >>Correct! You can feel fresh air at a temple. >>You will have fresh ait at the temple.  It relives your stress, too >>It relieves stress too.Also, I recommend meditation to you. >>Correct! After doing meditation, you can concentrate on your work more effectively.>>Correct! And you can refresh your mind and body. >>Correct!I went to BUL- GUK temple 2 years ago. >>Correct!  I stayed for week. >>I stayed there for a week.  It was unforgettable memory to me. >>It was an unforgettable experience.