Hannah, could you check these sentences?

Q: people love to have fun outdoors, and there are a lot of place to go. Would you prefer to climb the mountain or would you like to walk along the seashore? I prefer to walk along the seashore. When I was an officer, I always climbed a mountain because of a military training. It was so difficult. So I hate climbing a mountain. On the other hand, in the seashore, there are beautiful beach and sea water. These relive my stress well. Q: many young women seen obsessed with plastic surgery. What do you think about this phenomenon? It is their freedom to have plastic surgery. People judge a person by a first impression. If they have a beautiful appearance, they will be shown as a good person. Also, they can make many friends easily. I think appearance is important to be successful. However, my idea is not always perfect. Of course, maybe there are some disadvantages to take plastic surgery.

A dazzling morning to you [이름]!^^, Almost perfect dear!^^ Well anyway, check them out and compare our answers for some sentences. See you!^^ ~t. Hannah~ Q: people love to have fun outdoors, and there are a lot of place to go. Would you prefer to climb the mountain or would you like to walk along the seashore?I prefer to walk along the seashore. >>Correct!When I was an officer, I always climbed a mountain because of a military training. >>Correct!  It was so difficult. >>Correct!So I hate climbing a mountain. >>Correct! On the other hand, in the seashore, there are beautiful beach and sea water. >>On the other hand, in the seashore, there are lots of beatiful beaches and sea water.These relive my stress well. >>It actually relieves my stress.Q: many young women seen obsessed with plastic surgery. What do you think about this phenomenon?It is their freedom to have plastic surgery. >>Correct OR>>It depends on a person to have a plastic surgery.People judge a person by a first impression. >>People judge a person by first impressions only.If they have a beautiful appearance, they will be shown as a good person. >>If they are good-looking, they will be considered a good person right away.Also, they can make many friends easily. >>Correct!I think appearance is important to be successful. >>I think the appearance of a person is very important if he/she wants to be successful.However, my idea is not always perfect. >>Correct! Of course, maybe there are some disadvantages to take plastic surgery. >>Well ofcourse, i know there are disadvantages too on having plastic surgeries.