Hansel and Gretel

Hansel and Gretel was live with their father and stepmother! But they were so poor family. One day, Hansel and Gretel heard stepmother's trick. She wanted leave them in the woods! Next day, their stepmother and father went to woods with them. Andthan stepmother said "Wait and eat some bread, We will take some wood" and they left them and went to home. At night, they didn't come! they were scared. But he fell down the twinkle stone before, so they followed these stones and went to home!! Their father was happy, but Stepmother was angry. And than Next day, Stepmother took them a deep mountain and went to home. They couldn't go home, When they found their home, they saw a house with cookies,candies and chocolate!! But they were very hungry, they ate some cookies and chocolate! Oops!!! it's witch's house. They work at her house, and witch wanted eat them when they were fat!! One day, Gretel had a great idea. First, she said "Master, I don't know how to make a fire!!" So, when a witch near the burn, she put her into the burn!!! And witch was died, and they ran away this house, and they found their house! But their step mother died!! So they lived happiness^^

Good morning!This is a good practice of yours.You can enhance your writing skills by sharing to me all the stories that you have read, so far.Please go over my corrections so you will do better next time.Have a great day!Thank you so much for reminding me of this story.Now I miss my childhood days.^^Take care!_T.Grace^^Hansel and Gretel was live with their father and stepmother!>> Hansel and Gretel live with their father and stepmother!But they were so poor family. >> But they were a poor family.One day, Hansel and Gretel heard stepmother\'s trick.>> One day, Hansel and Gretel heard their stepmother\'s trick.She wanted leave them in the woods! >> She wanted to leave them in the woods!Next day, their stepmother and father went to woods with them. >> The next day, their stepmother and their father went to the woods with them.Andthan stepmother said \"Wait and eat some bread, We will take some wood\" and they left them and went to home. >> And then, their stepmother said, \"Wait and eat some bread. We will take some woods.\" And they left them and went home. At night, they didn\'t come! they were scared. >> Night came and they did not come! They were scared.But he fell down the twinkle stone before, so they followed these stones and went to home!! >> But he dropped twinkle stones along their way, so they followed these stones and went home!!Their father was happy, but Stepmother was angry. >> Their father was happy but their stepmother was angry.And than Next day, Stepmother took them a deep mountain and went to home. >> And then the next day, their stepmother took them deep into the mountains and went home.They couldn\'t go home, When they found their home, they saw a house with cookies,candies and chocolate!! >> They couldn\'t go home but when they found their way home, they saw a house with cookies, candies and chocolates!!But they were very hungry, they ate some cookies and chocolate! Oops!!! it\'s witch\'s house. >> They were very hungry and so, they ate some cookies and chocolates! Oops!!! It\'s the witch\'s house.They work at her house, and witch wanted eat them when they were fat!! >> They worked at her house and the witch wanted to eat them when they are already fat!!One day, Gretel had a great idea. >> CorrectFirst, she said, \"Master, I don\'t know how to make a fire!!\" >> CorrectSo, when a witch near the burn, she put her into the burn!!! >> So, when the witch was near the fire, she burned her!!!And witch was died, and they ran away this house, and they found their house! >> And the witch died. They ran away from the house and they found their house!But their step mother died!! So they lived happiness^^>> Their stepmother already died, so they lived happily ever after.^^