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2018-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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If you could visit any country in the world, where would you go and why? If I could, I want to visit all around the world. The world is really extensive, so I cannot choose just few countries. I want to see an aurora, glacier, the Milky way, wild animals. an Amazon and many things. I really want to enjoy many foriegn dishes as well.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! :)


That\'s true!

I love your composition. ^^

I wish I could also go all around the world.

I love travelling, but circumstances wouldn\'t allow me to.

Someday, I will. ^^



~~t. Ally



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If I could, I want to visit all around the world.

>> If I could, I would like to go all around the world.


 The world is really extensive, so I cannot choose just few countries.

>> The world is really extensive, so I cannot choose just a few countries.


 I want to see an aurora, glacier, the Milky way, wild animals.

>> I want to see the Aurora, the Glaciers, the Milky Way and some wild animals.


An Amazon and many things.

>> CORRECT!


 I really want to enjoy many foriegn dishes as well.

>> I really want to enjoy many foreign dishes as well.

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