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Hi, [이름]! :)
That\'s true!
I love your composition. ^^
I wish I could also go all around the world.
I love travelling, but circumstances wouldn\'t allow me to.
Someday, I will. ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I could, I want to visit all around the world.
>> If I could, I would like to go all around the world.
The world is really extensive, so I cannot choose just few countries.
>> The world is really extensive, so I cannot choose just a few countries.
I want to see an aurora, glacier, the Milky way, wild animals.
>> I want to see the Aurora, the Glaciers, the Milky Way and some wild animals.
An Amazon and many things.
>> CORRECT!
I really want to enjoy many foriegn dishes as well.
>> I really want to enjoy many foreign dishes as well.
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