happening 201801-1

Hyun jin rapidly returned his home and turned off his phone. My wife became to be furious and we decide to seek hyunjin since my son had known a his home. while going there, by the accident,we met him with his friend innearby small park. and my wife asked him that we go to our home to attempt to find my son's toy. finally, we found a toy that he used from his trouser pokect, we didn't accuse a boy but I was sorry about his reaction. Actually, when I was [이름], I had exprienced that I wanted to take another own's thing and lied ,but I learnt that It is wrong by my father's discipline. I don't want to think then since my dad was very furious. I know that little boys are tend to be greedy what they wanted and can be dishonest.however, It is wrong.my dad said. never lie,to be honest.and there is no good result before good trying. I hope to teach him honesty. he just has a little mistake that was possibly changed. because he will grow, like, my son and I good luck for him

Oh! This is I think the continuation of your previous message. Well said sir [이름]. Just try to look over the sentences I have corrected. Please feel free to ask me anything. Let’s try to find an easy way for you to express yourself. J

~T. Irene~

Hyun jin rapidly returned his home and turned off his phone.

>> Hyunjin hurriedly went home and turned off his phone.  

My wife became to be furious and we decide to seek hyunjin since my son had known a his home.

>> My wife got so furious so we decided to go to their house since my son knows where he lives.

while going there, by the accident,we met him with his friend innearby small park.

>> On our way to his place, we accidentally saw him with his friend in a nearby small park.

and my wife asked him that we go to our home to attempt to find my son\'s toy.

>> My wife asked to help us find my son’s toy.

finally, we found a toy that he used from his trouser pokect,

>> In the end, we found the toy in one of his pants’ pockets.
we didn\'t accuse a boy but I was sorry about his reaction.
>> We didn’t accuse him but I feel sorry about his reaction.
Actually, when I was [이름], I had exprienced that I wanted to take another own\'s thing and lied ,but I learnt that It is wrong by my father\'s discipline.

>> Actually, when I was [이름], I had the same experience when I was jealous of a friend’s toy and wanted to lie about it too. However, my father disciplined me well.
I don\'t want to think then since my dad was very furious.
>> I didn’t consider doing it them because it will make my father furious.
I know that little boys are tend to be greedy what they wanted and can be dishonest.

>> I understand that [이름] boys tend to be greedy and this will lead them to become dishonest.

however, It is wrong.my dad said. never lie,to be honest.and there is no good result before good trying.

>> However, my dad taught me that is wrong and never to lie.  Those wrong thoughts will not lead to good results.
I hope to teach him honesty. he just has a little mistake that was possibly changed. because he will grow, like, my son and I

>> I want to teach him to be honest. It was a small mistake and he can still possibly change because he will eventually grow up like me.
good luck for him

>> I wish him luck.