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Before I hope to talk about my Father's thaught, I want to talk about incident of my son and his friends in my home yesterday. My son is nine years old. but, he is precocious so he has a tendency of playing elder friends. recently, he often brought grandparent's home his friends especially, he was keen on two boys who excised taekwondo togather nearby gymnasium. Two boys were called hyunjin and jun[이름] who were 10years old. My son like to play internet games with them and dose to spent time together. so my wife decided to invite them our home and she tried to be generous. they visited our home during weekend. having played ,my wife prepared snack and vegitables for them. my wife and I thought that they are decent.so we satified that my son had a good time together. However, sadlly,It happened a incident when they returned.My son's most favourite toy that was played by one boy was disappeared. Although My spouse and my son saw a boy's used toy, he talked that I don't know continous

Hello sir [이름]. Thank you so much for writing this incident down. It’s a good experience which you can use for related questions in the IELTS test. I hope you will be able to match it to any of the questions they will be asking you.

~ T. Irene ~

Before I hope to talk about my Father\'s thaught, I want to talk about incident of my son and his friends in my home yesterday.

>> Before I will talk about what my father taught me, first, let me tell you about an incident that happened with my son yesterday.
My son is nine years old. but, he is precocious so he has a tendency of playing elder friends.

>> My son is a precocious child so he has the tendency to play with older kids.  
recently, he often brought grandparent\'s home his friends especially, he was keen on two boys who excised taekwondo togather nearby gymnasium.

>> Recently, he often brought to his grandparent’s home his friends.  He is particularly keen on being with these two boys whom he practice Taekwondo with in a nearby gymnasium.  
Two boys were called hyunjin and jun[이름] who were 10years old.

>> The two boys are Hyunjin and Junyoun who are both 10 years old.

My son like to play internet games with them and dose to spent time together.

>> My son likes playing internet games and does spend most of his time with them.

so my wife decided to invite them our home and she tried to be generous.

>> So my wife decided to invite them to our home because she wants to be generous to  them.

they visited our home during weekend.

>> They visit our home last weekend.

having played ,my wife prepared snack and vegitables for them.

>> While they were playing, my wife prepared them snacks like vegetables.

my wife and I thought that they are decent.so we satified that my son had a good time together.

>> My wife and I thought that they are decent kids so we are happy that our son is having a good time with them.
However, sadlly,It happened a incident when they returned.

>> Sadly, there was an incident during their last visit.

My son\'s most favourite toy that was played by one boy was disappeared.

>> My son’s most favorite toy which was being played by one of the boys disappeared.
Although My spouse and my son saw a boy\'s used toy, he talked that I don\'t know continous

>> Although, my wife and son saw that boy play with the said toy, he denied it.