happiness
학생이 쓴 원문
I think people happiness comes from inner side. almost people unhappy ,because they compare themsleves to others. when you have hobby you can find your happiness. so i recommend you go to outside make hobby
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]~! ^^ Thank you for doing your homework diligently~! ^^ I agree with your idea, true happiness comes from within themselves. Have a nice day!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think people happiness comes from inner side.
>>> I think people\'s happiness comes from within themselves.
almost people unhappy ,because they compare themsleves to others.
>>> Most people are unhappy because they compare themselves to others.
when you have hobby you can find your happiness.
>>> If you have hobbies, you can find your happiness.
so i recommend you go to outside make hobby
>>> So, I recommend you to have some hobbies outside home.
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