Happiness!
학생이 쓴 원문
The criteria of Happiness depends on me.
If we thank for everything and do everyone a favor, we are able to get happy.
I think that the first condition of happiness is appreciative mind.
The second is to considerate of others.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Mrs, [이름] Ha! I\'m glad that you answered the homework. Enjoy the rest of the day! :)
- Teacher Sophia
- Teacher Sophia
>> Correct
If we thank for everything and do everyone a favor, we are able to get happy.
If we thank for everything and do everyone a favor, we are able to get happy.
>> If we are thankful for everything and do everyone a favor, we will be able to be happy.
I think that the first condition of happiness is appreciative mind.
I think that the first condition of happiness is appreciative mind.
>> I think that the first condition of happiness is being appreciative.
The second is to considerate of others.
>> Secondly, to be considerate of others.
The second is to considerate of others.
>> Secondly, to be considerate of others.
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