happiness

What is your happiness? When I was asked that question I couldn't answer about that. I found why I couldn't answer about that. It depends on my situation. It's really terrible so I couldn't have any chance to think.It's miserable. But I can't help thinking. Everybody told me you should get out of your position whatever may happen. To avoid that condition, I need to positive thinking. Actually someone who have met me told me you are a positive person than anybody they met. In my case, my happiness are healthy family and my freedom.I can do anything. friends whom I can talk with. those things make me happy and keep happy. how do you think when you meet people who are passimistic and feel sad. To make them happy, you always have positive minds and take care of them sincerely.

Hi [이름]!!! You have here a great composition. Most of your sentences are good. Keep it up!!!Lei J   What is your happiness? >>correct When I was asked that question I couldn't answer about it. >>correct I found why I couldn't answer about that. >>I found out why I can't answer that question. It depends on my situation. >>correct It's really terrible so I couldn't have any chance to think. >>correct It's miserable. >>correct But I can't help thinking. >>But I can't help thinking about it. Everybody told me you should get out of your position whatever may happen. >>Everybody is telling me to get our of that situation whatever may happen. To avoid that condition, I need to positive thinking. >>To avoid that situation, I need to be positive. Actually someone who have met me told me you are a positive person than anybody they met. >>Actually someone who know me said that I am a positive person.1 In my case, my happiness are healthy family and my freedom. >>In my case, my happiness depends on my family's health and freedom. I can do anything. >>correct friends whom I can talk with. >>correct those things make me happy and keep me happy. >>correct how do you think when you meet people who are pessimistic ?lt;/span>and who always feel sad. >>correct To make them happy, you always have positive minds and take care of them sincerely. >>In order to make them happy, you need to have a positive mind and you should take care of them sincerely.