\"Happiness is not in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill
학생이 쓴 원문
I suppose it means happiness is not only from money. The quote says happiness is from not only money but also the joy of achievement, and the thrill of creative effort. I think Franklin D. Roosevelt wanted to say to people that they don\'t have to find their happiness in their money and they can find their own happiness in small things like the thrill of creative effort or the joy of achievement.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your second edited composition this week, Chloe!
As always, please check the corrections and alternative sentences.
Cheers,
Jean~~
\"Happiness is not in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort.\"
I suppose it means happiness is not only from money.
>> OR: To my [이름]d, it can be interpreted money is not the only source of happiness.
The quote says happiness is from not only money but also the joy of achievement, and the thrill of creative effort.
>> OR: The line from the quote states that happiness does not only come from money but also the pleasure arising from one\'s personal achievement.
I think Franklin D. Roosevelt wanted to say to people that they don\'t have to find their happiness in their money and they can find their own happiness in small things like the thrill of creative effort or the joy of achievement.
>> OR: I guess FDR wanted to express to people that money is not equivalent to happiness, instead, they can do the things they love and pursue the greatness that they believe they are capable of and get some happiness from their success.
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