Happiness is various according to each individual person.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I studied Korean history again.
Some gathered soldiers are training there today.
There are many soldiers.
Happiness is contenting with present.
I use my cellular phone in my free time when I am not working.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night. ☺
Today I studied Korean history again.
>> Today, I studied Korean history again.
Some gathered soldiers are training there today.
>> CORRECT
There are many soldiers.
>> CORRECT
Happiness is contenting with present.
>> Happiness is being content.
I use my cellular phone in my free time when I am not working.
>> I use my phone during my free time.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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