HAPPY
학생이 쓴 원문
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강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
(^__^)
Making the most of one\'s circumstances and aiming for a happy, joyous existence are choices that lead to happiness.
You don\'t need to have a flawless life or have no problems to be happy; yet, you might need to intentionally work at being happy.
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Have a good night!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
the fish makes me happy!
>>> The fish make me happy!
the friday makes me happy!
>>> Friday makes me happy!
the cat makes me happy!
>>> The cat makes me happy!
the dodge ball makes me happy!
>>> Playing dodge ball makes me happy!
the violin tune makes me happy!
>>> The violin tune makes me happy!
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