Happy Birthday!

2015-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Klein. Happy birthday! I postponed the class because I drunk a beer so late. I wish that you really have a wonderful time with your family and your friends. I am wondering if people in the Philippines have a special celebration on their birthday like eating a seaweed soup in Korea. I appreciate your interesting feedbacks. I think that you seem to be more considerate and thoughtful than any other people about the same age. See you tomorrow.^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! Thank you for your nice greeting, along with your reason for postponing the class. I knew it! Well, I sure am not going to drink. I shouldn\'t for it\'s still Wednesday. We still have a class tomorrow and on Friday. Too bad we don\'t have the custom of preparing seaweed soup on birthdays. But wait! I remember something. My elders used to say that pancit is good on birthdays for it symbolizes long life. But these days, many modern families no longer hold on to that belief. Should I blame modernization? Just a bit! We sure are affected by our environment. Besides, pancit is originally a Chinese cuisine. This is very telling then of our history. And speaking of the feedback/s, are you done with your reading? I\'m really glad that you get the chance to read it once in a while. I hope they aid you in your learning process; I should say MASTERING, because believe me when I say that you really speak English fluently. Thank you so much [이름]! Thanks for remembering this red-letter day for me. LOL I hope to catch you tomorrow! _Klein P.S. Don\'t drink this evening, but if it can\'t be avoided just not too much. STAY SAFE!!! Good afternoon, Klein. Happy birthday! >>CorrectI postponed the class because I drunk a beer so late. >>Correct [a beer - like one bottle/glass of beer only - HOPEFULLY!] OR >> I postponed the class because I drunk beer so late. [beer - no exact amount] I wish that you really have a wonderful time with your family and your friends. >>Correct I am wondering if people in the Philippines have a special celebration on their birthday like eating a seaweed soup in Korea. >>Correct [a seaweed soup - the kind of soup] OR >> I am wondering if Filipinos have a special celebration on their birthday like eating seaweed soup in Korea. [seaweed soup - itself]I appreciate your interesting feedbacks. I think that you seem to be more considerate and thoughtful than any other people about the same age.See you tomorrow.^^ >>Correct

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