HAPPY BIRTHDAY
학생이 쓴 원문
Birthday is very fun. What's your birthday?
MMy birthday is November 28th.
How do you celebreate your birthday.
We have a cake and games.
That's wonderful
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Birthdays are sure very fun! I\'m sure
that you look forward to your special day every
year! :)
Teacher Sarah
Birthday is very fun. What\'s your birthday?
MMy birthday is November 28th.
>> My birthday is on November 28th.
How do you celebreate your birthday.
>> How do you celebrate your birthday?
We have a cake and games.
>> I celebrate with a cake and we also have games.
That\'s wonderful
>>That\'s wonderful!
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