happy friday!
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes, we are following emotional and do expression
it\'s always not good result the following emotional
we have to control it.
My, grandfather buried under the ground.
Have a nice weekend Jeny :)
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon,
We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.
I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.
T. Jeny
>>Sometimes, we follow our emotions in expressing ourselves.
it\'s always not good result the following emotional
it\'s always not good result the following emotional
>>There is always a bad result when we follow our emotions.
we have to control it.
we have to control it.
>>So we have to control it.
My, grandfather buried under the ground.
>>My grandfather was buried under the ground.
Have a nice weekend Jeny :)
My, grandfather buried under the ground.
>>My grandfather was buried under the ground.
Have a nice weekend Jeny :)
>>correct
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