happy friday~~^^

2010-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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I have a intimate co-worker who got married one month ago. When we worked by night she boasted about her husband. She told that he loves her very much so whenever their eyes met he told her "I love you. you are very pretty" wow...I envy her. Even they have had a long relationship for 8 years. What a beautiful love!! I [이름]der how long love will maintain. The more I get older the more I have a lot of question about love. Maybe It is time to consider my life and my marriage. Actually I am diffident about married life with one person in my whole life. I think It'll be different between meaning of young current love and meaning or old age love. I wish I could look after my love.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Wow. That is so romantic. I think your co-worker뭩 husband really loves her. How I wish my future husband will do the same thing too. Have a great weekend girl and see you on Monday!!! Lei J I have a intimate co-worker who got married one month ago.>>My co-worker who was close to me got married last month.When we worked by night she boasted about her husband.>>When worked at night she boasted about her husband.She told that he loves her very much so whenever their eyes met he told her "I love you. you are very pretty">>She told me how he loves her so much that everytime their eyes meet he will tell her "I love you. you are very pretty"wow...I envy her.>>correctEven they have had a long relationship for 8 years.>>Also they had been in a relationship for 8 yearsWhat a beautiful love!!>>correctI [이름]der how long love will maintain.>>correctThe more I get older the more I have a lot of question about love.>>The more I get older, the more I question about love.Maybe It is time to consider my life and my marriage.>>correctActually I am diffident about married life with one person in my whole life.>>actually, I am indifferent about getting married to the one person and whom I will spend my whole life with.I think It'll be different between meaning of young current love and meaning or old age love.>>I think there is a difference between love at young age and love when you get older.I wish I could look after my love.^^ >>correct

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