happy friday!

2010-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

hi- this is hyunsung- i read that you've written about today class i like study english time with you- Do you rememder what you said first time when l got the phone? yes- today is friday night i wonder what is your plan during the wkeend..:) i am going to vivaldy park on this weekend with my friends to skiing i hope it's great time - if you are in korea, we'll go togeter.. oh- i really sorry about you- ㅠ i should have listened more carefully.. l might not have heard what you said.. you live in phillpins now-ㅠ.. um... Engilsh writing is difficult too.. ㅎㅎㅎ i think i am going to be a good speaker with you-~ you really help to me that preparing go to canada- anyway- have a good wkeend~ l can't waiting next monday :)

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hi-this is hyunsung- >>correcti read that you've written about today class >> I read that you've written something about today's class.i like study english time with you- >> I  like to study English with you.Do you rememder what you said first time when l got the phone?>> Do you still remember what you said the first time we talked over the phone?today is friday night>>It's friday night.i wonder what is your plan during the wkeend..:)>> What plan do you have for the weekend?i am going to vivaldy park on this weekend with my friends to skiing>> I am going to Vivaldy Park this weekend with my friends to ski.i hope it's great time - >> I hope it will be a great time. if you are in korea, we'll go together..>> If you are in Korea, I'll invite you to go with us.oh- i really sorry about you- ㅠ >> Oh i am really sorry about you.i should have listened more carefully.. >> I should have listened more carefully.l might not have heard what you said.. you live in phillpins now-ㅠ..>> I might not  heard what you said that you live in the Philippines.um... Engilsh writing is difficult too.. ㅎㅎㅎ >> Umm... English writing/composition is difficult too. i think i am going to be a good speaker with you-~ >>I think I am going to be a good English speaker with your help.you really help to me that preparing go to canada->> I want you to help me in preparation for my trip in Canada.anyway- have a good wkeend~ >>Anyway, have a good weekend.. l can't waiting next monday :) >> I can't wait until next monday:)

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