Happy friday again!

2026-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, Jeny The middle of Janurary already time too fast So, i need to using the time preciously. Have a nice weekend 1) My grammer is like a child, so i need to study more. 2) She is very excellent teacher. her name is Jeny. 3) We order to new machine. but it\'s a malfunction.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jon,

I really appreciate your commitment and dedication to learn. Keep the fire in you burning. I know that there\'s a lot more to discover in you and a lot of potentials to bring out!


T. Jeny


Hi, Jeny
>>correct
The middle of Janurary already
>>It is ready the middle of January.
time too fast
>>Time is too fast.
So, i need to using the time preciously.
>>So I need to use my time preciously.
Have a nice weekend
>>correct
1) My grammer is like a child, so i need to study more.
>>My grammar is like a child\'s, so I need to study more.
2) She is very excellent teacher. her name is Jeny.
>>correct
3) We order to new machine. but it\'s a malfunction.
>>We ordered a new machine, but it malfunctioned.

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