Happy friday my sweet sweet lei~~!!

2011-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

When I took your call first I was very nervous talking with foreigner. But now although I can't speak fluently I want to talk with foreigner. I am very proud my self. As I told you, I prepared a national examination to be a teacher before but not now. It was too hard to pass the examination. Eventually I gave up the test and I got a current job. But always I am eagering for another job which is suitable for me so I had a lot of hard time. But you made me smile maybe I am happy when I am studying. With preparing my class I felt really enjoyed. oh...I just remember at the moment when I heard about your age. Because I considered you as my teaher older than me I don't know why I did just feeling. I'll miss you my sweet lei~^^ take care~!

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Thank you so much for fully participating during our classes. You are so special to me you know that. I found a friends in you. I don't want to say goodbye because as you have said you will just have some break and then register again here at Power English. I wish you all the best dear. I will miss you friend. Go girl, reach your dreams. Always take care and stay beautiful! God Bless!! Love, Lei J   Happy friday my sweet sweet lei~~!! >>correct When I took your call first I was very nervous talking with foreigner. >>The first time I answered your call, I was so nervous talking to a foreigner. But now, although I can't speak fluently, I want to talk with foreigner. >>correct I am very proud myself. >>correct As I told you, I prepared a national examination to be a teacher before but not now. >>As I told you, I was preparing for teacher's national examination but not anymore. It was too hard to pass the examination. >>correct Eventually I gave up the test and I got a current job. >>correct But always I am eagering for another job which is suitable for me so I had a lot of hard time. >>But I am always eager to find another job which is more suitable for me so I had a lot of hardships. But you made me smile maybe I am happy when I am studying. >>correct With preparing my class I felt really enjoyed. >>I really enjoyed preparing for each of our classes. oh...I just remember at the moment when I heard about your age. >>Oh…I just remembered the moment you told me your age. Because I considered you as my teaher older than me I don't know why I did just feeling. >>Because I considered you as my teacher, I thought that you are older than I am. I'll miss you my sweet lei~^^ take care~! >>correct

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