Happy friday my sweet sweet lei~~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
When I took your call first I was very nervous talking with foreigner.
But now although I can't speak fluently I want to talk with foreigner.
I am very proud my self.
As I told you, I prepared a national examination to be a teacher
before but not now.
It was too hard to pass the examination.
Eventually I gave up the test and I got a current job.
But always I am eagering for another job
which is suitable for me so I had a lot of hard time.
But you made me smile maybe I am happy when I am studying.
With preparing my class I felt really enjoyed.
oh...I just remember at the moment when I heard about your age.
Because I considered you as my teaher older than me I don't know
why I did just feeling.
I'll miss you my sweet lei~^^ take care~!
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Thank you so much for fully participating during our classes. You are so special to me you know that. I found a friends in you. I don't want to say goodbye because as you have said you will just have some break and then register again here at Power English. I wish you all the best dear. I will miss you friend. Go girl, reach your dreams. Always take care and stay beautiful! God Bless!!
Love, Lei J
Happy friday my sweet sweet lei~~!!
>>correct
When I took your call first I was very nervous talking with foreigner.
>>The first time I answered your call, I was so nervous talking to a foreigner.
But now, although I can't speak fluently, I want to talk with foreigner.
>>correct
I am very proud myself.
>>correct
As I told you, I prepared a national examination to be a teacher before but not now.
>>As I told you, I was preparing for teacher's national examination but not anymore.
It was too hard to pass the examination.
>>correct
Eventually I gave up the test and I got a current job.
>>correct
But always I am eagering for another job which is suitable for me so I had a lot of hard time.
>>But I am always eager to find another job which is more suitable for me so I had a lot of hardships.
But you made me smile maybe I am happy when I am studying.
>>correct
With preparing my class I felt really enjoyed.
>>I really enjoyed preparing for each of our classes.
oh...I just remember at the moment when I heard about your age.
>>Oh…I just remembered the moment you told me your age.
Because I considered you as my teaher older than me I don't know why I did just feeling.
>>Because I considered you as my teacher, I thought that you are older than I am.
I'll miss you my sweet lei~^^ take care~!
>>correct
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