Happy halloween!
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy halloween!!!!
Today 10/31 sunday is the halloween day!!!
Halloween is the ghost day to everyone!
We wear ghost clothes and get halloween cosplay.
I worked hard at home!
I talked my friends!, my friend said \"Oh today is halloween! I play games all day! hahahaha\"
I will wear ghost costume Next Hallowenn to 2022!!!]
Happy halloween!!!!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I talked my friends!, my friend said \"Oh today is halloween! I play games all day! hahahaha\"
I will wear ghost costume Next Hallowenn to 2022!!!]
Halloween is the ghost day to everyone!
>>>Halloween is a celebration where everyone can celebrate and dressed up as ghosts.
We wear ghost clothes and get halloween cosplay.
>>We wear ghost clothes and get to cosplay many different characters.
I talked my friends!, my friend said \"Oh today is halloween! I play games all day! hahahaha\"
>>I talked to my friends!, my friend said \"Oh today is halloween! I play games all day! hahahaha\"
I will wear ghost costume Next Hallowenn to 2022!!!]
>>I will wear a ghost costume next Halloween 2022!!!]
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