Happy Monday?

2025-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, Jeny It\'s Monday again so fast Have a good day Thank you always! 1. Which I bought some mangoes yesterday. They were very sweet. (which) 2. As the weather fine, being we went out for a walk. (use ‘being’ instead of ‘was’) 3. It is very hot. I can’t go out now too. (too) 4. If peter did not work hard. So he failed the test. (if) 5. Both the students are intelligent. as well as they are good too. (as well as)

강사 첨삭

Hello Jon!!!

Take care and have a good day as well.

I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience. Nice job on your homework today, you are improving. Just persevere and you\'ll see yourself speaking the language well.

T. Jeny


Hi, Jeny
>>correct
It\'s Monday again so fast
>>correct
Have a good day
>>correct
Thank you always!
>>correct
1. Which I bought some mangoes yesterday. They were very sweet. (which)
>>The mangoes which I bought yesterday were very sweet.
2. As the weather fine, being we went out for a walk. (use ‘being’ instead of ‘was’)
>>The weather being fine, we went out for a walk.
3. It is very hot. I can’t go out now too. (too)
>> It is too hot to go out now.
4. If peter did not work hard. So he failed the test. (if)
>>If Peter worked hard, he would not fail the test.
5. Both the students are intelligent. as well as they are good too. (as well as)
>>Both the students are intelligent as well as good.

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