Happy Monday!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jeny
Good morning
Have a nice week!
1) I am a smp artist. I want to famous artist someday.
2) Balance is much important of life
3) Donald Trump doing break boundary of nation for USA first.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon,
Everyday is a challenge. We need to live with the challenges of life and in order for us to get through with it. We must learn our lessons first. then you will see yourself a better and mature person.
T.Jeny
Hi, Jeny
>>correct
Good morning
>>correct
Have a nice week!
>>correct
1) I am a smp artist. I want to famous artist someday.
>> I am a smp artist. I want to be a famous artist someday.
2) Balance is much important of life
>>Balance is the most important thing in life.
3) Donald Trump doing break boundary of nation for USA first.
>>Donald Trump is going to break the boundary of the nation of the USA first.
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