happy monday~~~!! ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I met my friends last night and I was shocked.
a friend opened his heart to me.
"I am sorry that it was difficult touching with you.
why did not call me at ordinary times?"
It was not until I heard that I knew the truth.
oh...how insensitive I am.
I like them but I did not express my heart.
Friendship with them is one of my precious asset.
uh...I have a hangover.
I have to take a rest. bye bye~~~
강사 첨삭
Oh hi J!!! Well sometimes things happen and we don't notice it and we sometimes think that we are becoming insensitive. But it's nice though that your friends actually tried to become so honest. Have some rest and hope you'll enjoy your long holiday!!! Take care!!!
Lei :-)
I met my friends last night and I was shocked.
>>correct
a friend opened his heart to me.
>>correct
"I am sorry that it was difficult touching with you.
>>I am sorry because it was so difficult to keep in touch with you.
why did not call me at ordinary times?"
>>correct
It was not until I heard that I knew the truth.
>>correct
oh...how insensitive I am.
>>correct
I like them but I did not express my heart.
>>correct
Friendship with them is one of my precious asset.
>>My friendship with them is one of my precious assets.
uh...I have a hangover.
>>correct
I have to take a rest. bye bye~~~
>>correct
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