Happy Monday!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!!
A great noon to you!
I guess that you really have a big problem.
Of course your children are scared because of this news.
Can you not cancel the ticket and make another plan?
If possible only.
This accident has really made a big impact to all people around the world since it is a very tragic accident.
Many people are really praying for a big miracle.
And families and relatives of these people or just holding on to their hopes and prayers.
This news really made me feel sad.
Anyway, I\'m going to see you later Mr. [이름]!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I was so surprised due to the sea disaster of the Sewol Car Ferry for Jeju island.
>> I was so surprised due to the sea disaster of the Sewol Car Ferry going to Jeju island.
Most of the Korean peoples are mourning for the victim and criticizing the government managements and poor safety precautions.
>> Most of the Koreans are mourning for the victims and criticizing the government\'s poor managements and safety precautions.
It was really a matter for regret.
>> It was really a matter of regret.
A lot of the divers are really trying in rescue operations but couldn\'t rescue any alive people yet.
>> A lot of the divers are really trying in the rescue operations but couldn\'t rescue any alive people yet.
Unbelivably quick ocean current and high wave are blocking a rescue operations.
>> Unbelievably, quick ocean currents and high waves are blocking the rescue operations.
The sadness of families who are waiting a missing people are inexpressible.
>> The sadness of families who are waiting for the missing people are inexpressible.
Already passed 5 days but many peoples of the whole world are eagering for a miracle and comforting a person who is in sorrow.
>> Five days have already passed but many peoples around the world are hoping for a miracle and comforting the people who are in sorrow.
I really hope to come back alive the hundreds of missing persons.
>> I really hope that the hundreds of people missing would be found alive.
However, I have a serious problem.
>> correct!
My family was scheduled to travel for the Jeju island in early May by the Car Ferry.
>> My family was scheduled to travel to Jeju island in early May by the Car Ferry.
My son and daughter are scared because of this accident.
>> My son and my daughter are scared because of this accident.
>> or: My children are ......
They are afraid of sailing.
>> correct!
>> or: They are afraid to sail.
I have got the cruise ticket so hardly due to the golden holiday.
>> I got the cruise ticket so hard due to the golden holiday.
What should I do…..
>> correct!
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