Happy New Year!
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Theme: [ESSAY] Was last year a good year for you? In what way or why not? (This is not a COVID question.^^)
The Good way:
1. I stay home a lot.
2. I stay with my parents a lot.
3. I read a lot.
4. I studied a lot.
5. I enjoyed eating food.
The Bad way:
1. I couldn\'t go to water park.
2. I couldn\'t go to school.(The biggist one)
3. I couldn\'t go to ice rink on winter.
4. I couldn\'t meet my friends a lot.
5. I gain weight.
6. I couldn\'t exercise a lot.
7. I got up later.
I think It was not so bad year but not so good year. : )
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Hi there, Clair!
Thanks for sending your homework. Catch you in class!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Was last year a good year for you? In what way or why not? (This is not a COVID question.^^)
The Good way:
>> The good things:
1. I stay home a lot.
>> I stayed at home a lot. [This is about last year so your verb should be in the past form, \'stayed\'.]
>> or: I stayed at home most of the time.
2. I stay with my parents a lot.
>> I stayed with my parents a lot.
>> or: I spent most of my year with my parents.
3. I read a lot.
>> or: I read for the most part of the year.
4. I studied a lot.
>> or: More often than not, I was studying.
5. I enjoyed eating food.
>> or: I became more of a foodie last year.
The Bad way:
>> The bad things:
1. I couldn\'t go to water park.
>> I couldn\'t go to water parks.
2. I couldn\'t go to school.(The biggist one)
>> I couldn\'t go to school. (The biggest one)
3. I couldn\'t go to ice rink on winter.
>> I couldn\'t go to ice rinks in the winter.
4. I couldn\'t meet my friends a lot.
>> or: I couldn\'t meet my friends as often as I wanted.
5. I gain weight.
>> I gained weight.
6. I couldn\'t exercise a lot.
>> or: I couldn\'t exercise outdoors frequently.
7. I got up later.
>> or: I got up later than usual.
I think It was not so bad year but not so good year. : )
>> I think the year was not so bad but it was not so good either.
>> or: I think 2020 was not so bad but neither was it so good.
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