Happy new year!
학생이 쓴 원문
I went hiking small mountain testerday with my husband.
We enjoyed snow-covered and quiet mountain roads.
I can calm down and reflect on my 50s.
I don\'t have any special goals for this year.
But I will try to continue many things that I am doing now.
I also ask for your help this year!
강사 첨삭
Happy New Year Ms. [이름]!
I\'m glad to hear stories from you on how you spent your New Year and you focus in your inner being by having a reflection. hope that this year will be great for all of us.
See you!
Aki~
I went hiking small mountain testerday with my husband.
>>> I went hiking a small mountain yesterday with my husband.
We enjoyed snow-covered and quiet mountain roads.
>>> We enjoyed the snow-covered and quiet mountain roads.
I can calm down and reflect on my 50s.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t have any special goals for this year.
>>> CORRECT!
But I will try to continue many things that I am doing now.
>>> But I will try to continue doing many things that I have started.
I also ask for your help this year!
>>> CORRECT!
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