Happy new year!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon!
You can speak the English well, you can make a good conservation, if you just push yourself to speak and improve your skills,
Just believe in yourself that you can.
Have a great day!!!
T. Jeny
Hi, Jeny
>>correct
Happy new year !!
>>Happy New Year!!
I hope every your plan doing good and healthy always.
>>I hope all your plans are going well and that you are always healthy.
1. Always, need to resolution everything
>>We always need a resolution for everything.
2. This season heavy crowed everywhere.
>>It is crowded everywhere in this season.
3. anybody want to make on their business but, it\'s hard for made
>>Everybody wants to have their own business, but it\'s quite hard.
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