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2014-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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I like to change my introspective character. It doesn't change overnight, but I got to try! Because that character makes me lazy and stucked in my room. I want to make lots's of new friends and experiences, so if I can improve my character, I could gain many things!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thanks for expressing your thoughts here.^^ Anyway, that\'s a good plan or goal for you. I hope that you\'ll really try it.^^  You don\'t have anything to lose, but you will gain something. Please check the corrections below and we\'ll talk more about this in class, if you like. See you! ~T. Alice~ I like to change my introspective character. >> Correct! It doesn\'t change overnight, but I got to try! >> Correct! OR >> It doesn\'t change overnight, but I\'ve got to try. Because that character makes me lazy and stucked in my room. >> Correct! [stuck] I want to make lots\'s of new friends and experiences, so if I can improve my character, I could gain many things!! >> I want to make lots of new friends and experiences, so if I can improve my character, I could gain many things!!^^ 

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