Happy new year~!
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow~!
It is the first monday of the new year.
I am full of energy!
I woke up early in this morning for new starting.
It was very cold and I still feel cold.
uh...The first day of the new year, I introduced my boyfriend to my
relatives.
He looked like very nervous but he tried his best to mingle with my
family.
I was very proud of him and I felt we are real family.
It means so much to us.
I wish we are good couple now and for ever.^^
Oh my I am hungry already.
Have a good lunch time~!!
강사 첨삭
Hi J!!! Wow, it's nice to know that everything went well. Am I hearing wedding bells now? Because I heard that in Korea if you introduce your boyfriend/girlfriend to your relatives it means that you are getting engaged to be married. Wow I am so happy for you girl. Happy New year!!!
Lei J
Wow~!
>>correct
It is the first monday of the new year.
>>correct
>>It is the first Monday of the year.
I am full of energy!
>>correct
I woke up early in this morning for new starting.
>>I woke up early this morning for a new start.
It was very cold and I still feel cold.
>>correct
uh...The first day of the new year, I introduced my boyfriend to my relatives.
>>On the first day of the year, I intoduced my boyfriend to my relatives.
He looked like very nervous but he tried his best to mingle with my family.
>>He looked very nervous, but he tried his best to mingle with my family.
I was very proud of him and I felt we are a real family.
>>correct
It means so much to us.
>>correct
I wish we are good couple now and for ever.^^
>>I wish we will be a good couple now and forever.
Oh my I am hungry already.
>>correct
Have a good lunch time~!!
>>correct
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