Happy new year~!

2011-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Wow~! It is the first monday of the new year. I am full of energy! I woke up early in this morning for new starting. It was very cold and I still feel cold. uh...The first day of the new year, I introduced my boyfriend to my relatives. He looked like very nervous but he tried his best to mingle with my family. I was very proud of him and I felt we are real family. It means so much to us. I wish we are good couple now and for ever.^^ Oh my I am hungry already. Have a good lunch time~!!

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Wow, it's nice to know that everything went well. Am I hearing wedding bells now? Because I heard that in Korea if you introduce your boyfriend/girlfriend to your relatives it means that you are getting engaged to be married. Wow I am so happy for you girl. Happy New year!!! Lei J   Wow~! >>correct It is the first monday of the new year. >>correct >>It is the first Monday of the year. I am full of energy! >>correct I woke up early in this morning for new starting. >>I woke up early this morning for a new start. It was very cold and I still feel cold. >>correct uh...The first day of the new year, I introduced my boyfriend to my relatives. >>On the first day of the year, I intoduced my boyfriend to my relatives. He looked like very nervous but he tried his best to mingle with my family. >>He looked very nervous, but he tried his best to mingle with my family. I was very proud of him and I felt we are a real family. >>correct It means so much to us. >>correct I wish we are good couple now and for ever.^^ >>I wish we will be a good couple now and forever. Oh my I am hungry already. >>correct Have a good lunch time~!! >>correct

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