Happy new year!

2020-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear teacher Sheila Hi Sheila! Speak English is difficult. And share to someone about novel\'s story be more difficult. I told you novel \"The Last Leaf\". But my talk not enough. So I share you the novel\'s information. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Last_Leaf Have you read this novel? I want tell you about the novel\'s story. But it was too difficult. I will try practice it.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tony! I understand what you were feeling. Don\'t worry I will help you with that. 

You were actually doing a great job. You just have to believe in yourself.

Until the next one!

See you on Monday! :)

~Teacher Sheila ^_^



Speak English is difficult. 
>>Speaking English is difficult.
OR>>Speaking using English is difficult.

And share to someone about novel\'s story be more difficult.
>>And sharing to someone about the story of a novel is more difficult.

I told you novel \"The Last Leaf\". 
>>I told you the novel \"The Last Leaf\".

But my talk not enough. 
>>But, the time was not enough.
OR>>But, trying to tell you was not enough.

So I share you the novel\'s information.
>>So, I will share with you the novel\'s information.

Have you read this novel?
>>CORRECT
OR>>Have you tried reading this novel?

I want tell you about the novel\'s story. 
>>CORRECT
OR>>I want to tell you about the story of this novel.

But it was too difficult. 
>>CORRECT
OR>>But It was difficult for me.

I will try practice it.
>>I will try to practice it.

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