happy new year's homework

2015-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Ms.shanee Hello! I wondered your praise. Thank you. Today is period of new year. But I'm working. ah..We have few days for lesson time..I'm sad.. You will be more cool t0eacher. I can sure! Always I feel thanks.. ㅠㅠ See you next week! Take care~ 1. The president was elected by the people. -People chose the president. or-People elected the president. 2. The child was hit by a car. -A car hit the child. 3. This book was written by an Irishman. -Irishman wrote this book. 4. The bag was packed by his mother. -His mohter packed the bag. 5. The club was founded by Ron and Peggy. -Ron and peggy founded the club by themselves.

강사 첨삭

Hi there pretty [이름]!   Thank you very much for attending your class with me and for not failing to make your homework. I am so glad that you appreciate my teachings. Though I am so sad that you\'ll leave me for Australia, I am hoping for your success in there. I hope that everything will be alright and that you\'ll always be safe. See you on our last class my dear!   ~Teacher Shanee   Ms.shanee Hello! >>> Hello Ms. [Name]! I wondered your praise. >>> I was pleased to read your comments. Thank you. >>> Correct!Today is period of new year. >>> Today is the period of celebrating a brand new year. But I\'m working. >>> Correct!ah..We have few days for lesson time..I\'m sad.. >>> Ah... We only have a few days for our class. I\'m sad.You will be more cool t0eacher. >>> You will be a cooler teacher. I can sure! >>> I am sure about that.Always I feel thanks.. ㅠㅠ >>> I am always thankful.See you next week! >>> Correct! Take care~ >>> Take care!~ 1. The president was elected by the people.-People chose the president.or-People elected the president.>>> OR: The people elected the president.2. The child was hit by a car.-A car hit the child.>>> Correct!3. This book was written by an Irishman.-Irishman wrote this book.>>> An Irishman wrote this book.4. The bag was packed by his mother.-His mohter packed the bag.>>> Correct! [mother]5. The club was founded by Ron and Peggy.-Ron and peggy founded the club by themselves. >>> Correct! [Peggy]

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