happy new year's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Ms.shanee Hello! I wondered your praise. Thank you.
Today is period of new year. But I'm working.
ah..We have few days for lesson time..I'm sad..
You will be more cool t0eacher. I can sure!
Always I feel thanks.. ㅠㅠ
See you next week! Take care~
1. The president was elected by the people.
-People chose the president.
or-People elected the president.
2. The child was hit by a car.
-A car hit the child.
3. This book was written by an Irishman.
-Irishman wrote this book.
4. The bag was packed by his mother.
-His mohter packed the bag.
5. The club was founded by Ron and Peggy.
-Ron and peggy founded the club by themselves.
강사 첨삭
Hi there pretty [이름]!
Thank you very much for attending your class with me and for not failing to make your homework.
I am so glad that you appreciate my teachings.
Though I am so sad that you\'ll leave me for Australia, I am hoping for your success in there.
I hope that everything will be alright and that you\'ll always be safe.
See you on our last class my dear!
~Teacher Shanee
Ms.shanee Hello!
>>> Hello Ms. [Name]!
I wondered your praise.
>>> I was pleased to read your comments.
Thank you.
>>> Correct!Today is period of new year.
>>> Today is the period of celebrating a brand new year.
But I\'m working.
>>> Correct!ah..We have few days for lesson time..I\'m sad..
>>> Ah... We only have a few days for our class. I\'m sad.You will be more cool t0eacher.
>>> You will be a cooler teacher.
I can sure!
>>> I am sure about that.Always I feel thanks.. ㅠㅠ
>>> I am always thankful.See you next week!
>>> Correct!
Take care~
>>> Take care!~
1. The president was elected by the people.-People chose the president.or-People elected the president.>>> OR: The people elected the president.2. The child was hit by a car.-A car hit the child.>>> Correct!3. This book was written by an Irishman.-Irishman wrote this book.>>> An Irishman wrote this book.4. The bag was packed by his mother.-His mohter packed the bag.>>> Correct! [mother]5. The club was founded by Ron and Peggy.-Ron and peggy founded the club by themselves.
>>> Correct! [Peggy]
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