Happy New Years and Keeping your health.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your lesson for this year.
I think, you are busy with your baby and helping your wife.
I also was very busy when I took care of my son in 20 years ago.
After working, I had to do something for my wife. for example, taking care of my son, making foods, cleaning room and living room..
I understood your situations but now, enjoy your situation. if your baby is getting growing until 6 years old, your will see your cute baby.
but if over 6 years old, you can not see it, because your baby will make a accident for you to prevent somethings.
Anyway, Happy New Years and keeping your health.
See you next year 2021!!!
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your lesson for this year.
I also was very busy when I took care of my son in 20 years ago.
After working, I had to do something for my wife. for example, taking care of my son, making foods, cleaning room and living room.
I understood your situations but now, enjoy your situation. if your baby is getting growing until 6 years old, your will see your cute baby.
but if over 6 years old, you can not see it, because your baby will make a accident for you to prevent somethings.
Thank you for your lesson for this year.
>> CORRECT
I think, you are busy with your baby and helping your wife.
>> CORRECT
I also was very busy when I took care of my son in 20 years ago.
>> I was also very busy when I took care of my son 20 years ago.
After working, I had to do something for my wife. for example, taking care of my son, making foods, cleaning room and living room.
>> After work, I had to do something for my wife. For example, taking care of my son, cooking foods, cleaning the room and the living room.
I understood your situations but now, enjoy your situation. if your baby is getting growing until 6 years old, your will see your cute baby.
>> I understood your situation but you should enjoy and spend your time with your wife and daughter. If your baby becomes 6 years old, she will be a cute baby.
but if over 6 years old, you can not see it, because your baby will make a accident for you to prevent somethings.
>> But if she will be 6 years old and above, you won\'t have the chance to see how cute she was because she will become naughty and playful.
Anyway, Happy New Years and keeping your health.
Anyway, Happy New Years and keeping your health.
>> Anyway, Happy New Year and always be healthy.
See you next year 2021!!!
See you next year 2021!!!
>> CORRECT
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