Happy newyear Jannete♥
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Hi Jannete how was your holiday?...haha
I had a party so I didn't remember our conversation
By any chance, was I mistake to you?
If I did, sorry Janette ToT..
Essay writing. What are the good and bad experiences you had in the year 2011?
Last year is like a present for me and for my familly
The good experience is that my brother got a job
Now,Korea has over one milion of job seeker. Most of them graduated university or has a master degree. It is big social problem. That's why I happy to my brother's happening
The bad experience for me is that I quitted my university. I spent many days agonizing and fanally
I decided it. It was hard time for me but I don't regret everything
Thanks to my decision I dream my new challenge!
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름] First of all, HAPPY NEW YEAR!! May this year be another blessing to you and to your family. I hope that you can rhave whatever you want. And I am so happy to know the great and worst news about your 2011. Well, we all have our ups and downs... and it\'s up to us whether we will stay down or if we will stand up. Anyway, you didn\'t do anything wrong to me, don\'t worry. And this year let\'s continue studying English. Keep on fighting! See ya in class Miss [이름],., Have a wonderful evening for now~
Hi Jannete how was your holiday?...haha
>> Hi Janette, how was your holiday? Haha.I had a party so I didn\'t remember our conversation
>> I had a party so I don\'t remember our conversation.By any chance, was I mistake to you?
>> By any chance, did I commit a mistake to you?If I did, sorry Janette ToT..
>> Correct!^^Essay writing. What are the good and bad experiences you had in the year 2011?Last year is like a present for me and for my familly
>> Last year is was a present for me and for my family.The good experience is that my brother got a job
>> Correct!^^Now,Korea has over one milion of job seeker.
>> Now, Korea has over one million job seekers.
Most of them graduated university or has a master degree.
>> Most of them graduated from university or have master\'s degree.
It is big social problem.
>> It is a big social problem.
That\'s why I happy to my brother\'s happening
>> That\'s why I am happy for what happened to my brother.The bad experience for me is that I quitted my university.
>> The bad experience for me was I quit my university.
I spent many days agonizing and fanally
>> I spent many days agonizing and finallyI decided it. It was hard time for me but I don\'t regret everything
>> I was able to decide. It was a hard time for me but I don\'t regret everything.Thanks to my decision I dream my new challenge!
>> Correct!^^
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