Happy school day!!

2010-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 janel

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday, our class started to work for real. I was really excited about it. In the reading class, I learned about a poem. The poem was really good. For last, when I had a amath test, I got 75% So I went to my best friend's desk and asked him what is his score. He said that he got 100% So, I said to him that I got 75% and he said it's great. I was really happy that he said that 75% is great score too.

강사 첨삭

Very good [이름]! I also feel proud that you got a good score.Study well.  -Teacher Jm    Yesterday, our class started to work for real. >>>CorrectI was really excited about it. >>>CorrectIn the reading class, I learned about a poem. >>>CorrectThe poem was really good. >>>CorrectFor last, when I had a amath test, I got 75% >>>For the last subject, when I had a math test, I got 75%.So I went to my best friend's desk and asked him what is his score. >>>So I went to my best friend's desk and asked him what his score was.He said that he got 100% >>>CorrectSo, I said to him that I got 75% and he said it's great. >>>CorrectI was really happy that he said that 75% is great score too. >>>I was really happy that he said that 75% is great score too.

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